tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16957364.post114907963233920811..comments2023-04-14T21:22:35.178+10:00Comments on Down In The Hole: When To Start Again?Daniel Hatadihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00453583064175651509noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16957364.post-1152242528305828022006-07-07T13:22:00.000+10:002006-07-07T13:22:00.000+10:00Coming to this a month late, I'd lean toward finis...Coming to this a month late, I'd lean toward finishing even if only as a learning experience. Book two might be better for have gone through that motion. <BR/><BR/>Of course, if the process is stunting your growth as a writer- if you feel like you're not actually getting anything back from the exercise - then cut and run. <BR/><BR/>The one thing that is certain is that you should not get in your own way... I've know plenty of writers who put all their energy and effort into one project and they tie up their identity as writers in that one book as though there won't be another.... I tell these people to look at writing as a CAREER. At the end of your days are you planning to look back on one masterwork or a body of quality stuff? I'd rather be Ed McBain than Harper Lee. (not that I've actually read To Kill a Mockingbird, but come 'on. One book?)Stevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06511395415516451829noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16957364.post-1149468516065350142006-06-05T10:48:00.000+10:002006-06-05T10:48:00.000+10:00That does help. I like the idea of the body floati...That does help. I like the idea of the body floating to the surface metaphor. It allows me to dive down right now and pull it to the surface. Or not.Daniel Hatadihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00453583064175651509noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16957364.post-1149440254838822632006-06-05T02:57:00.000+10:002006-06-05T02:57:00.000+10:00Bodies float to the surface when the laws of physi...Bodies float to the surface when the laws of physics demand it. Figure the same with your writing. Anything that's causing you too much angst can be pulled out again in a year, or maybe five years and reconsidered. Writing improves, one hopes, ideas and plotlines remain.<BR/><BR/>This isn't much help is it?Mindy Tarquinihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02970872751327021013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16957364.post-1149194970196184662006-06-02T06:49:00.000+10:002006-06-02T06:49:00.000+10:00I come at this from the other side, as someone who...I come at this from the other side, as someone who did put book one aside (after it was fully written) and moved on. And then I re-wrote it, and still moved one. I couldn't write a damn query letter for that novel to save my life and I didn't think it would ever be published.<BR/><BR/>So, I entered it in a couple contests, it longlisted and then it won. Now it's getting published.<BR/><BR/>All I can say is, when I wrote it, the goal was just to get it done. Not worry if it was good or bad, obsess over every word and scene. Just get it done. Then I felt this sense of accomplishment - I could write a book. The new goal was to write a better book. Then a good book. A year later, three manuscripts done, I went back and re-wrote #1. I could see layers in it I never saw first time around. Part of the learning, I guess.<BR/><BR/>And there's still room for improvement. Just know yourself - is putting it aside giving up and avoiding an important part of your journey (completion) or is it the right thing to do?<BR/><BR/>Only you can know, but there is no one right answer.Sandra Ruttanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06109584805469336742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16957364.post-1149176476567371312006-06-02T01:41:00.000+10:002006-06-02T01:41:00.000+10:00That's because she knows I'm right. A wise and wo...That's because she knows I'm right. A wise and wonderful woman, Mary. With keen insights. You should listen to her. ;-)Stephen Blackmoorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01241134280141088631noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16957364.post-1149127361241449692006-06-01T12:02:00.000+10:002006-06-01T12:02:00.000+10:00Thanks, Stephen B. I'm taking it all on board.And ...Thanks, Stephen B. I'm taking it all on board.<BR/><BR/>And Mary, you ALWAYS agree with him. Even when he said you were with me because of the threats I'd put on your family.<BR/><BR/>You know what will happen now, don't you?Daniel Hatadihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00453583064175651509noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16957364.post-1149120602286376442006-06-01T10:10:00.000+10:002006-06-01T10:10:00.000+10:00I think you've been given some great advice there ...I think you've been given some great advice there and I totally agree with Stephen.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12221362768923638404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16957364.post-1149091540809861832006-06-01T02:05:00.000+10:002006-06-01T02:05:00.000+10:00Tough decision. I had a novel bouncing through my...Tough decision. I had a novel bouncing through my head for years and thought I had finally given it up after rewriting it as a short story. That's when I figured out that it was the voice and the style that I wanted to do it in and the little fucker's back.<BR/><BR/>Maybe it's time to put it aside, as opposed to into the waste can, and let it percolate a little more. You've got a good idea and a fun character. Be a shame to see him die forever. <BR/><BR/>Whatever you do, I'm sure it'll work out eventually. And I'm sure you've got more than one book in you.Stephen Blackmoorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01241134280141088631noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16957364.post-1149086737530594042006-06-01T00:45:00.000+10:002006-06-01T00:45:00.000+10:00Stuart: rest assured that if I can't get this nove...Stuart: rest assured that if I can't get this novel working, I WILL let it go.<BR/><BR/>But if I don't, I'll just avoid conventions. They're too expensive for me anyway.<BR/><BR/>Stephen: It's possibly a little clinical, but I'm going through the character notes and trimming them down to the essence, making sure to list things like the character's inner and outer goals, and the price of success or failure with those goals.<BR/><BR/>It got me loving my MC again, so hopefully it'll work on the others.<BR/><BR/>The other technique I'm using is to watch Jimi Hendrix at the Isle Of Wight. Seems to be giving me some perspective. And the DVD looks so much better than my old VHS!Daniel Hatadihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00453583064175651509noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16957364.post-1149083434155258852006-05-31T23:50:00.000+10:002006-05-31T23:50:00.000+10:00Daniel,How do you hope to fall in love with your c...Daniel,<BR/><BR/>How do you hope to fall in love with your characters again?<BR/><BR/>Asking from the last 10% of my book,<BR/>StephenStephen D. Rogershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12356287007864614439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16957364.post-1149083249802068342006-05-31T23:47:00.000+10:002006-05-31T23:47:00.000+10:00Sometimes the hardest thing to do is say, "Fuck th...Sometimes the hardest thing to do is say, "Fuck this," and start something new.<BR/><BR/>But I've also met people who've spent SEVEN YEARS reworking the same bloody book, instead of treating it as a learning experience and moving on. <BR/><BR/>Neither are nice, but the latter gets you avoided at conventions, especially in the bar.Stuart MacBridehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12392706513278533408noreply@blogger.com