tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16957364.post1326243702634754724..comments2023-04-14T21:22:35.178+10:00Comments on Down In The Hole: How To Write It Much More BettererDaniel Hatadihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00453583064175651509noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16957364.post-91663118688408863502007-01-18T09:48:00.000+11:002007-01-18T09:48:00.000+11:00Thank you, Anne. A 'wow' from you with this piece ...Thank you, Anne. A 'wow' from you with this piece means a lot.Daniel Hatadihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00453583064175651509noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16957364.post-57882341605591118772007-01-18T09:31:00.000+11:002007-01-18T09:31:00.000+11:00wow. very nice!! i really liked the orginal, but...wow. very nice!! i really liked the orginal, but this revision is proof that it's all about rewriting.anne frasierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044828332429421657noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16957364.post-73990066356829571782007-01-17T13:17:00.000+11:002007-01-17T13:17:00.000+11:00I have achieved MAXIMUM CREEP FACTOR!
Thanks for ...I have achieved MAXIMUM CREEP FACTOR!<br /><br />Thanks for the feedback, Angie. Feedback definitely helps the learning process.Daniel Hatadihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00453583064175651509noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16957364.post-77382621708890484712007-01-17T13:13:00.000+11:002007-01-17T13:13:00.000+11:00Yep. This version is much, much better. Not only...Yep. This version is much, much better. Not only does it move along nicely, but the creep factor is much more intense. Amazing what a good edit can do!angiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01751466673491487048noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16957364.post-65402611623698389412007-01-17T12:29:00.000+11:002007-01-17T12:29:00.000+11:00Thank you very much, ladies.
*tips hat*Thank you very much, ladies. <br /><br />*tips hat*Daniel Hatadihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00453583064175651509noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16957364.post-22398242321241695582007-01-17T12:16:00.000+11:002007-01-17T12:16:00.000+11:00That Mindy...she's a pain in the mold...
This wor...That Mindy...she's a pain in the mold...<br /><br />This works well, Daniel.Mindy Tarquinihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02970872751327021013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16957364.post-1682508338157020522007-01-17T12:01:00.000+11:002007-01-17T12:01:00.000+11:00Okay, that is seriously creepy. Mindy is a kick as...Okay, that is seriously creepy. Mindy is a kick ass editor, so now I'll have to zip over and read your original version. I don't think most folks realize how difficult it is to write truly good flash fiction.angiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01751466673491487048noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16957364.post-70327376168411118082007-01-16T11:22:00.000+11:002007-01-16T11:22:00.000+11:00Ya, like it much better now that the food is "spoi...Ya, like it much better now that the food is "spoiled" ;-)Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12221362768923638404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16957364.post-55562981152748149272007-01-16T03:04:00.000+11:002007-01-16T03:04:00.000+11:00That Mindy, she's a smartie.
Glad to see you read...That Mindy, she's a smartie.<br /><br />Glad to see you reading Billingham - one of my personal faves.Sandra Ruttanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06109584805469336742noreply@blogger.com